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Black Glass

Phantom, the shadow without eyes, drenched with lies, cast the magic in a plastic casket. Power was enclosed in a bag whilst the envy edges to the top of a sleepless mound. Happiness is hidden well, but who’s to tell if it can’t be found? Impulsive smiles are shunned by the frowns of an innocent child. Sickness unto foolish wealth, spinning in a negative whirlwind; claws of beasts; for so help the imbalance of invisible steps, cloaked by revolving hatred being dealt – living deceased.

~That Dude Eddie~

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Love and Peace.

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12 comments on “Black Glass

  1. so sad but good!

    side note it’s a good rap 😉

  2. Another stunning piece of prose.

  3. Good work, indded! Will be glad to follow your blog, thanks for following mine! I hope you’ll also like a suggestion of mine? Do you use sites like zazzle.com, cafepress. com, fiverr? They could be a good way to promote your works and to help “remove” stupidity in the streets like headlines on t-shirts, fridge-magnets, cups, etc: My Boyfriend kisses Better Than Yours, FBI – female body inspector, etc. Not everything we see and think of should be about sex, right? It would be much better if there were more nice pictures of mythical creatures, good thoughts, poems from fantasy genre, etc? I’m allanbard there, I use some of my illustrations, thoughts, poems from my books (like: One can fight money only with money, Even in the hottest fire there’s a bit of water, All the problems in the world lead to one – narrow-minded people, or
    Let’s watch the moon, let’s meet the sun!
    Let’s hear soon the way the Deed was done!
    Let’s listen to the music the shiny crystals played,
    let’s welcome crowds of creatures good and great… etc). Hope such lines look and sound much better than the usual we see and hear every day? Best wishes! Let the wonderful noise of the sea always sounds in your ears! (a greeting of the water dragons’hunters – my Tale Of The Rock Pieces).

    • I will most definitively look into those sites. Thank you for sharing this with me. I’d like to talk to you more about Cafepress and Zazzle since you seem to already have experience. Thanks again.

      Love and Peace.

      ~That Dude Eddie~

  4. fantastic really enjoyed the imagery of this piece

  5. This is my first visit to your site. W-O-W. The wordsmith in you is cool, and so is the web design.

  6. Awful to feel like one is dead while alive. k.

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