Hey guys, I’m back with a new vlog. Sorry, for the delay but I been rather busy the past week. Anyway here it is.
That Dude Eddie Talks About Writing and Recites “10,000 Midnights”
Let me know what you guys think.
Hey guys, I’m back with a new vlog. Sorry, for the delay but I been rather busy the past week. Anyway here it is.
That Dude Eddie Talks About Writing and Recites “10,000 Midnights”
Let me know what you guys think.
Hey guys, I took your suggestions into consideration and recited my first poem! WOOT WOOT! You can also feel free to simply read it bellow the video if you dont feel like looking at me.
Without further ado, here is The “Janitor”. Hope you enjoy it along with my randomness. Let me know what you guys think.
The Janitor
Oh, the soil stakes as so, but fertility is excuse
The shovel cannot dig deeper into my skull fore there is no bone
Sweeper of weeps, my teeth grow long
So sure. To plea, after paying soul-less toll
Mirror-youra-forever-alone
Count the speckles of dust after drawing your final death
But, without a surgeon’s touch, you can only do so much…
What you need is a steady state of mind
You need to focus your time on spiritual growth
And be divine, fore love is the only way – the only oath
All you can do is hope….
Soap…
Please don’t forget to share.
Peace and Love.
It’s always in the back of my mind
In the stack of vines
Divine
SO kind…
But not of mine
It’s an artifice so wise…
SO wise that even the skies divide before you arrive
No mystery of whom – or what I speak of
Or reach above
Or teacup…
THAT piece is bugged
Forever stuck in a numb-minded ruck
Buffalo Grass, neatly tucked
But whose niche is but a glitch?
I..
Lay and twitch…
As I wait for your ways to switch
Not to mention that every stitch is your wish
And every dish is washed by blood and moss
Nature’s cross isn’t dried with a cloth
But, with a belt instead
I take the books and feed my head
With only a plan, plan, plan to be dead..
Then resurrected by the peoples’ voices
The frequencies summon my soul in another body
Therefore, when it gets cloudy…
You must not allow your mind to get rowdy.
Silent viper… wear your belt.
How am I supposed to know what’s right or wrong?
I’m living life just as everyone else
But everyone else – you – you’re all as nothing
And everything being nothing makes energy as everything
Thus, since everything is energy, everything is nothing
Without motion
Without emotion
We cannot move
It’s my turn and I cannot go
Because I am parked in the parking-lot by the park
I’ll be taking aim shorty
At the pork, but please, you’ll have to be patient
Surgery is….
Illogical
Contradictory
History
It’s illiteracy
It’s all in your mind.
Hey guys, here is my 2nd vlog. I briefly discuss some of my inspirations and how I write my poetry in this one. I actually put in some effort into editing this vlog, so, if you’d be kind enough to view it, I would greatly appreciate it.
Let me know what you guys think.
This was a piece I wrote a few months ago in my English class when I fell in love with my ex. Although I knew the relationship would fail, I didn’t want to let go because of the feelings I had for her….
This right here is a recuperation test
This piece is intended to see if my work really ran dry
But, instead of a poem, I chose to rant in poetic format
Today was a better day
Yesterday, mental stress was imposed upon me
Today, it is more physical
My stomach stings
Nausea tempts the nearby trashcan
I don’t know where it is, however
It’s probably by Ms. Walker’s desk
Or by the homework trays
Well, now, it seems to be a pressure in my chest
Is it the lack of rest or the mucus accounting for the cough?
Either way, it is uncomfortable and annoying
On the other hand, I plan to tell her that I’m in love
Again, I am in love… but I’m more than prepared to tell
Fully prepared
I really do mean it
It seems like a win or lose situation, still
My aim is to win her heart
If I am to lose, than forever we’ll be apart
I most certainly don’t want things to come to this
Maybe this purple-bat ring will verify the marriage
That is, if I even get to see her
I’ll be waiting in the spot…
Waiting for you to come…
This is my saddest attempt to try something new
The line before really was written in cursive
I was simply trying to spice up my day; to try something new
But it didn’t really help – it even hurt a little bit
Nothing is new, and my poetry runs dry
It was destiny for me to be insane, I can see it in the sky
No time to rhyme, nor reason to express; zero consent
I wonder how many feel this
Rather, how many care?
You may read, but can you hear?
I go… nowhere
Just like that, my mood flips and turns
And upon my return, muy mind rejects concern
My mistake is, where, where
Who’s there?
You, there
Truth-slayer
Tooth-decayer
Why did you bring me to you lair?
I’ve always given you my all – my robe, even my hair
This is, is so, so unfair
Lost in word
Infrastructure in smile, congruent to tile
Thought is vile, but only for a little while
So smile; so sorry, I’m running out of room on the page
Which means an idea will too, give birth
I guess this is my finale for the night
I L-L-Love you and that’s that to say
Your name, your aim is to burn by the flame
Your game, is to be played until the end of days
I’m out of words
Thank you
What it it that you’re pretending?
A slap to the chest – the result of an angered grimace
Discomfort to the banana ants
I know your story
A “never-will-be” type of treatment
I see all corners of your glass.
Fool yourself with the foolishness of approach
Yellow like the bus of “young scholars;” like the disgust in my reflection -
To see what you DARED to do!
To take step in a direction of calming auras – my wooden and starved throne, before the wandering eyes.
Broken.
Shattered.
Mop away that…
That “for me…”
That lane of lies – those of which I do not care to partake in…
Make sure to send me that poison – as if – make sure to bake a newer batch.
A Potassium connoisseur
A sewer of relations
A devastation to relationship
The shallowness of a kiss.
Find my words
Dig beneath the putrid tiles on which you walk
I don’t need anything – not from you, not from I
But as the robotic response is delivered, mailed and such, I foretell what is told.
Behold – you hold the mold – my heart – NEVER MORE
But, my surest mail-woman, return to the offices of dual tribulation
Two of one kind…
Ants ate the will – so ask them if you will – if they too tingle from your tainted touch
Too much laughter..
From me…
Because I now know what it is that you are…..
You are as the banana ants.
To my temporal’s rear, Poseidon’s pillow surfaces
Soaked by Aegean rain, the Egyptian cotton unfolds from original form
Olympian stones fall into the ripples of Atlas’s pores
May I wait? Word of mail is swift
Hasty Hermes is here to grant a kick
Then to trip over Medusa’s poison weave
Hercules, you can thrust, you can heave
But you won’t believe that I’ve caught your disease
A double whopper with cheese…
Emotionless bondage, find a better way
Memorize the path, repeat it every day
If obtrusion blocks thee, sock and shoe
Lock and chew; illusion of rock and tea; stock for you
Who, in proportion to lines of distorted time
Dew stains the marks of abortion-ed eyes, so blind
Inclined, balance to belly of the brain
Colored by paint to mask the essence of pain
Kill thy pest, scorching flesh coated with oil
Interest for foil, aluminum skin within the water’s boil
Not a sequence, B and P, confused as gas to knife
Sorry, but you were designated to bring the paper to life
On tree-less spoil, no comprehension
Numb my mind with constant detention. Who?