Emotionless bondage, find a better way
Memorize the path, repeat it every day
If obtrusion blocks thee, sock and shoe
Lock and chew; illusion of rock and tea; stock for you
Who, in proportion to lines of distorted time
Dew stains the marks of abortion-ed eyes, so blind
Inclined, balance to belly of the brain
Colored by paint to mask the essence of pain
Kill thy pest, scorching flesh coated with oil
Interest for foil, aluminum skin within the water’s boil
Not a sequence, B and P, confused as gas to knife
Sorry, but you were designated to bring the paper to life
On tree-less spoil, no comprehension
Numb my mind with constant detention. Who?
Carl-Paul Henneman
January 20, 2013 at 5:41 pm
You/ve been evolving furiously as a poet. I really like the turn your last 4 pieces have taken. Stay in this direction.
thatdudeeddie
January 20, 2013 at 7:14 pm
What distinguishes them from the others?
Carl-Paul Henneman
January 20, 2013 at 8:04 pm
Little more surreal
George Fripley
January 20, 2013 at 7:16 pm
Love this, been saying it loud…it rocks!
A Rhythm Runs Through It
January 20, 2013 at 10:00 pm
Great work E! Such an amazing color palette of words!
thatdudeeddie
January 20, 2013 at 11:01 pm
Awl thank you ^_^
Shackled and Crowned
January 21, 2013 at 3:40 am
Eddie, this is great. I love the wordplay.
Chatty Owl
January 22, 2013 at 8:19 am
The most enchanting scattered words.
LunarB
January 28, 2013 at 1:39 pm
DOPE!!! NICE!