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Wind Children

A message to those who cannot read with their hearts

I’m there to wash away the bondage

I can only hear your breath because I was the one who took it away

Not breathless because of my deeds, no

But by my absence of action

I could hear your gentle voice for a while

I chose to ignore, but please, understand my reasonings

What I didn’t do was because of what you did

And what you did was what you didn’t do

We’re both playing a childish game

Hmph, but I win

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2 comments on “Wind Children

  1. Brilliant – I especially likes the line -“what you did was what you didn’t do” How many times is that true? so very very many.

  2. This is brilliant. I really love it. The way you wrote this poetry and even the words you used. My two favorite lines were “A message to those who cannot read with their hearts” and “I can only hear your breath because I was the one who took it away”

    Keep up the good work! I hope to read more from you :)

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