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Cup of Love

29 Dec

I need a river full of love

I want an ocean full of love to fill this void

It’ll never be enough to fill my heart

The holes will remain forever

I once had a cup, but once it overflowed, I had nothing

My empty cup just sat there, in the darkness, to be filled again

Once “again” came, I knew what the end result would be

I knew once again that my cup of love would be empty

It’s never enough

The holes will remain

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13 Comments

Posted by on December 29, 2012 in Poems

 

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13 Responses to Cup of Love

  1. Shackled and Crowned

    December 29, 2012 at 9:38 pm

    Never enough

     
  2. jalal michae sabbagh.http:// gravatat.com/jmsabbagh86@gmail.com

    December 29, 2012 at 10:18 pm

    fascinating poem.Every cup overflowed with what was in them.Love is the essence of life .One breathe is enough to fill the heart.Have a wonderful new year.jalal

     
  3. poetart

    December 30, 2012 at 1:48 am

    Thanks for sharing. :)

     
  4. tara lee

    December 30, 2012 at 9:43 am

    hi, I’ve nominated you for blog of the year, here is the detail http://taraleeblog.wordpress.com/2012/12/30/blog-of-the-year/ thank you

     
  5. cmarandawrites

    December 30, 2012 at 11:02 am

    Really great poem. The cup metaphor is used perfectly. Perhaps you should elaborate? Was the cup ever knocked over? Just some food for thought. Thank you for sharing

     
  6. Diane

    December 30, 2012 at 2:16 pm

    Love this one, stark and yet full of meaning. Thanks – Diane

     
  7. transitionstande

    December 30, 2012 at 4:58 pm

    I like your poem. You might like my poem, “I thirst”.It’s about a cup of another kind of love.

     
  8. e1aine

    December 30, 2012 at 5:28 pm

    My new favourite.

     
  9. 12kilroy

    January 4, 2013 at 3:12 am

    This is very effective.

     
  10. Chatty Owl

    January 11, 2013 at 10:15 am

    This is brilliant. Looking forward looking at your blog more.

     
  11. oneofsevenbillion

    January 29, 2013 at 8:35 pm

    I like it, it’s sweet

     
  12. ioniamartin

    February 15, 2013 at 8:36 pm

    Beautiful!

     
  13. Cody McCullough

    February 20, 2013 at 10:17 pm

    Great poem.

     

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