They say to be careful with whatever you do
But all I ever wanted in my heart was an image of you
Your luscious skin accounts for lustful sins
There is no amount required to win, but…
But this is my heart’s bitter end
Please be my friend because all I’ve ever had was foes…
When we used to eat ketchup and count our toes
Now I’m wearing blue bath-robes instead of clothes
This was the premeditation of invoice
An envious mind is the source of a thin choice
I appoint two faces of a numbered beast
The razors will rip and carve through teeth
They will haunt the same shape
They will scavenge the wickedness until light decreases
No premonitions of rest nor peace, yet only stress in pieces
All to it a stench of clearly rippled units
Fall, the crew is hit
Feel the bombs as they pursue your ship
Is that why?
If only you could reply…
Must it be brought up more?
This is the reason for madness
For three months I’ve been consumed by sadness
Over time, my flesh grew cold and began to shatter
Please lend me a sign
I sauce yet another time
A piece of mind shouldn’t be this hard to find
When you’re mine, I promise there will be no reason to rewind




maryamchahine
December 17, 2012 at 12:41 pm
Very nice…..the last stanza is my favorite.
poeticjason
December 19, 2012 at 10:13 am
Very cool man…really dig this site too. Added it to my archive of active poets.
thatdudeeddie
December 19, 2012 at 10:14 am
Ooooh! I’m honored ^_^ thank ya! Have a super-swell day!
poeticjason
December 19, 2012 at 10:19 am
Eh, I am trying to use my blog as a way to promote not only my work but poets I enjoy reading man, it is all about community. Besides you have liked every single post I have so far.
thatdudeeddie
December 19, 2012 at 10:25 am
Definitely, definitely. And it’s because you have some great material. How long have you been writing?
poeticjason
December 19, 2012 at 10:28 am
I have been at it for twenty years now. However I have not been sharing online very long.
thatdudeeddie
December 19, 2012 at 10:30 am
Ooooh! Quite a span of time! Have you been sharing it to the public?
poeticjason
December 19, 2012 at 10:33 am
I used too, but got sidetracked with life issues. Trying to get a book thing going thru Kickstarter to get it out there for people to check out. Am looking for an open mic event in my area, may have to start one myself it seems.
emma1951.wordpress.com
March 18, 2013 at 2:43 pm
Are you too good to be real?!!!
thatdudeeddie
March 18, 2013 at 4:32 pm
I’m real!