My brother, I feel your pain…
Trust me, it flows through my veins
But all is vain
To claim
A lower standard in itself
For its wealth
And insane is…
A term of endearment for mind
Of mine, heap and dirt
To dumb it down
No smug or crown or jug of town
My brother, I see the light…
Of the mysterious future
A mind of mahogany accounts for a suture
Of the spine
Of burglary
Cold-blooded weapon in hand
Healer of the crimes and perjury
This nine, add up some digits and leak the red wine
My brother, I hear the sirens…
The cages and fences indent the beginning of the next sentence
Rather, line
No need to remind, I’m running out of time
No need to recline, we need be the reason to define
The seasons are fine, so give me the modern meaning of mine
Eanie, meanie, mighty snow
Who’s to know the next branches to grow?
Owls? How so?
Need not stay; the snowmen will thrown
The squares, to which none compare in humble despair
My brother, you know…
My flesh and hope is,whether or not you’re aware
Or, uh, care…
Yeah, yeah, same sad story
The continuously repeated, Spartan-depleted demise of glory
Read the words carefully, but don’t overlook
The message is there, but the chef must cook
NoT cAuGhT in slumber or in the riddles of the mind
ThE mAnIpUlAtIoN is signed
JFK in the space, fine on the line
I know you feel it; fumbled is the foot which is lost
My brother, forever will your brain be crossed
My brother, I will supply the will
To be still, but I love and cherish, still
ONE LOVE





Ewan Phillips
December 8, 2012 at 10:40 am
Hey I really like this Poem. Thanks for checking out my blog. I am curious to know where you get your inspiration from? I am always looking for new sources. : )
Carl-Paul Henneman
December 8, 2012 at 12:55 pm
This is a real good one Ed
alesiablogs
December 8, 2012 at 5:35 pm
Thanks for checking out my blog! Man you have some real experience with this blogging thing! I am a novice. Thanks again. Alesia
thatdudeeddie
December 8, 2012 at 5:37 pm
Haha, you’ll familiarize yourself with it. With time comes wisdom
Diane M Dickson
December 9, 2012 at 5:55 am
Another thought provoking piece. I spotted a missing word, or rather the space where it should be. In the line “no need to recline” hope you don’t mind me saying.
thatdudeeddie
December 10, 2012 at 10:05 am
Leave it to ms Diane to find typos. Maybe I should hire you as my editor. Hehe
iamforchange
December 9, 2012 at 3:25 pm
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Posted on December 9, 2012
thatdudeeddie
December 10, 2012 at 10:03 am
What a honor, thank you for the nomination and such a nice compliment. I will be sure to check out your post.
Peace and Love.
franzad
December 9, 2012 at 5:02 pm
Hi, dude eddie, thanks for follow and likes….like your great epic writing, hope to see you around,
wish you a great week,
franza
thatdudeeddie
December 10, 2012 at 9:57 am
No problem any time, thank you for stopping by.
Peace and Love.
chester maynes
December 10, 2012 at 11:31 am
wow, smart poetry!
so mind-boggling
maryamchahine
December 10, 2012 at 2:09 pm
Great poem! These are my favorite lines:
“No need to recline, we need be the reason to define
The seasons are fine, so give me the modern meaning of mine
Eanie, meanie, mighty snow
Who’s to know the next branches to grow?”
Acep Aprilyana
December 11, 2012 at 9:54 am
nice poem bro.
Heartafire
December 13, 2012 at 10:15 pm
This is good, little rap thing going on?
pasupatidasi
December 19, 2012 at 10:27 am
sounds like a song