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The Grass is Greener

02 Dec

The Grass is Greener

Lord, this is my best method of communication

I cannot focus in tongue as I’m growing numb

Is this Your test or evil at its best?

These words, Lord, they fall upon deaf ears

The thoughts are clear, but these letters always seem to disappear

When she’ s near, You know who, as to no clue

But her name and Your name are heard in vain

Trials were designed to shun my shine

At times, but always gives me lines to climb

Gray lines are seen as silver-platter ladders

Heavy steel is fatter and chrome roams to the splatter

Blood on these streets

Blood on these hands

Mud on these sheets

You wont’ understand

Deals are under hand

Night-night, night – I gave you my bowl

The stories are old, but you know what was foretold

The beats cease when it’s time to clean the ducts of defeat

Suggest and action and I will partake

Send me a sign so I know that You care

I know You do, but my naturalism needs a reminder

I was forced to disfigure the solitudes in confinement

A prayer can be heard from the quietest of voices

We’re given choices to help guide us to Your appointment

You know what I mean

Once more, folding of knee

I still beg for a better day, just show me the way

I’d do as You say, but please, may the love stay?

Okay, this is my conclusion

I’ll follow the light; always winning and never losing

I take your wings, green dragonfly

To greener grasses, we fly

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21 Comments

Posted by on December 2, 2012 in Poems

 

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21 Responses to The Grass is Greener

  1. maryamchahine

    December 2, 2012 at 3:01 pm

    Very beautiful….

     
  2. Carl-Paul Henneman

    December 2, 2012 at 3:19 pm

    We’re given choices to help guide us to Your appointment… wicked clever. nice piece ed

     
  3. Imahni Dawson

    December 2, 2012 at 4:34 pm

    Oh I love this so. Exactly what I needed to hear.

     
    • thatdudeeddie

      December 2, 2012 at 5:07 pm

      Thank you, I’m glad to hear that my words where of use. Makes it all worth it. Stay awesome! :)

       
  4. Diane

    December 3, 2012 at 9:33 am

    Another lovely piece, this had a wonderful atmosphere – I particularly liked “silver-platter ladders” that appealed to me. Great – Diane

     
    • thatdudeeddie

      December 6, 2012 at 9:52 am

      Hey Diane, I’m glad you are still enjoying my pieces. Thank you. :)

       
  5. akwardinson

    December 3, 2012 at 11:42 am

    Lovely piece :)
    Love this line > “The thoughts are clear, but these letters always seem to disappear”

     
  6. ivonprefontaine

    December 3, 2012 at 7:58 pm

    I nominated you for the “Blog of the Year 2012” award. Please go to Teacher as Transformer at this link http://ivonprefontaine.com/2012/12/04/blog-of-the-year-2012/ for information. Congratulations!

     
  7. Kris Kennedy

    December 4, 2012 at 10:12 am

    Wow…very cool and powerful words…so real…transparent grappling…very cool.

     
    • thatdudeeddie

      December 6, 2012 at 9:55 am

      Hey Kris, Thank you for your kind comment. :)

      Peace and Love.

       
  8. Jnana Hodson

    December 5, 2012 at 9:50 am

    Ah, yes, taking her name in vain!
    Still one listens, but the other one’s gone.
    Do you hear the clear wings as your answer?

     
  9. WB

    December 5, 2012 at 3:07 pm

    Excellent poem, and well written too. Keep doing what you’re doing.

     
    • thatdudeeddie

      December 6, 2012 at 9:57 am

      Thank you for your kind words. Yes, I shall keep writing. :)

      Peace and Love.

       
  10. birchpoet

    December 6, 2012 at 12:48 am

    Write on dude. Very righteous stuff. Thanks for stopping by and making the connection.

     
    • thatdudeeddie

      December 6, 2012 at 9:58 am

      No problem and thank you. :)

      Peace and Love.

       
  11. Geeta

    December 8, 2012 at 7:28 am

    Really elated to read your poem, everyone I guess can easily relate to the poem. Good work Dude.

     
  12. Alia S

    December 8, 2012 at 9:21 am

    Very touching. Well-written ! I’m glad to encounter your blog :)

     

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