I don’t want to fight anymore
Through the months, we’ve come so far
Bent knee, leg at peace and rest
Rug, deceased; ye’ brushed by belief
But not at this moment
May the blackened tavern illuminate with release
Folding corners’ rippling record of release
Point to the exit, an underhanded periodical space
Cordless electronics, may not they be hidden
Of course, not the communication
Only the compassion
Good riddens, my reputation is a hallucination
I’m drawn back to YOU like the rhymes of my words
My best friend, it’s good to have you back
I haven’t seen you since you’ve entered the forest
That was the most frightening night
I saw the weeping bat
Again, I’m drawn back
This is the trail to the foot-less streets
“I’m stuck,” says the duck
I’m “moo-ing” for milk
Please help
Resistance is felt, but it…
Doesn’t really help; a heap of junk
As the arrows of wind descend, you…
You will always be my friend
To the bitter end; haha, don’t pretend
I count before I spend
The others, I must defend
The metal is hot with flames, but it will never bend
My friend, no friend




MarinaSofia
November 29, 2012 at 10:00 am
Crazy poem? Not sure about that. It has a certain something – I feel as if I almost understand it. What was it that Alice said in Through the Looking Glass ‘It fills my head with ideas, only I don’t exactly know what they are…’
thatdudeeddie
November 29, 2012 at 10:48 am
So you don’t think it falls under the “crazy poem” category? That’s the beauty of poetry, people can get different feels from the same poem. I wonder what kind of ideas you are getting.
Thanks for the comment.
Maggie Fleming
November 29, 2012 at 10:08 am
I love this! I’d love to see a video clip of you reading this out loud. It has such amazing rhythm.
thatdudeeddie
November 29, 2012 at 10:14 am
Thank you
Don’t worry, I will start making vlogs soon enough.
Crimson
November 29, 2012 at 3:19 pm
I like this a lot. It reminds me of a friendship I have with someone.
shawnrjones12
December 3, 2012 at 1:58 pm
Beautiful rhythm!