This week, folklore between the bars of prison
Social standing, all but accurate precision
All but boastful incision in the term of decision
Back then, the decommission of commitment
Now, the mission to dish in the belts of felt equipment
Write me
Tell me where to find the love
On the blue Earth, there is some
But it does not measure to up above
Or may I be pessimistic and say there is none
From finger
To trigger
To chamber
To slug of gun
From bullet
From barrel
To tower of apparel, undone
Sly quote, slick coat of white towel is sung
And slung
In slum
From tooth of gum
From roof, truth is hung
Your legs, they are burdensome
But use them to run
Majority ruler, mathematical pursuer
Pond of sewer is skewered whilst dollar is fond of fewer reviewers
Never winning in the game of fame, only losing
Weather is tame and humble to those whom fumble when choosing
Fool me once, shame on me
Fool me twice, this cannot be
Death is measured by 3′s
Under the green trees, the disease of concrete streets
My friend
My family
Two of word
My foes
So happy
Account for heard
Listen
~That Dude Eddie~
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Peace and love.




buckwheatsrisk
September 23, 2012 at 8:57 pm
wow dude so good!
Tanveer Rauf
September 24, 2012 at 1:36 am
very descriptive, very nice indeed
JPF Goodman
September 24, 2012 at 7:58 am
Nice, and I’m thinking it might be even better to hear you speak these lines, if you have recording facilities! However, rhyme has its dangers, so take care not to let it take over your sense!
Diane
September 24, 2012 at 8:05 am
I wonder, do these come to you fully formed (mind usually do) or do you work and whittle at them until you are happy that they are how they want to be.
Another super thought provoking piece of work.
on thehomefrontandbeyond
September 24, 2012 at 10:01 am
amazing energy in this – so many wonderful phrases that can be taken on their own
Tanveer Rauf
October 27, 2012 at 10:17 pm
so many points to ponder, so many eye openers , so rhythmic——–remarkable