Magnum’s womb, A clip equipped for doom
Sanctioned hands, aim for moon
At the rays of noon, pray the day soons
No room, so groom and lay
In the patches of pavement, dashing by
From ankle to thigh
Thinking about white bubble and seething of lie
The yellow speed of a cry, reasons to why
Why I
Try to
Conclude
With you
With shingle and passage
Not the above, but the bottle of cashes
Brom frone to packaged ashes
Chrome throne, among the songs of Atlas
Under the bed, confused showers of baskets
Compositions, to toy your tonsil
That is, under opposition of council
An ounce-ful restriction of benediction
Under mine
Words of chime
To
Tooth and beyond
To
Appeal the mind
Understand that I was due in form
Understand that I do conform to try
Why I
~ That Dude Eddie~
Please don’t forget to share this. 
Peace and Love.
Diane
September 15, 2012 at 4:22 pm
Very powerful. You certainly know how to make the mind reach and stretch for meaning and then pow and it all makes sense. – great – Diane
thatdudeeddie
September 15, 2012 at 4:32 pm
^_^ Thank you
bluebeets
September 15, 2012 at 8:07 pm
Exactly. Glad I saw this comment- couldn’t have put it better!
Chantale Reve
September 16, 2012 at 2:50 am
Razor-sharp rap-ture. Boom!
weapongirl
September 17, 2012 at 4:16 am
Dude, your word play is inspiring. Love the movement of the words.
doncarroll
September 17, 2012 at 5:53 am
nice rhythm here eddie. great spin.
black rose
September 19, 2012 at 7:18 am
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