Buckled knuckles in the smirking bottle.
I hear the chuckles and they shuffle to a throttle.
Cool blue over gray, every day.
Beseech the dismay on boats beached asea.
A mellow maceral in breezes of stoned apparel.
There’ll be imperil in the periled barrels.
Believe whole-kindheartedly.
The trolls patrol the holes they control and make it hard to see.
With or without pause, fraud is the one without cause.
Please listen, love is bisson so we need paz.
Read your lips and twist the scripts.
You boast so quick and make me sick.
The blood, so thick.
Bricked, so brisk.
~ That Dude Eddie~
Please don’t forget to share this. 
Peace and Love.
hiddinsight
August 31, 2012 at 6:57 pm
Love it! I kind of feel like it could go with my last post like jam on toast. We were engrossed with the host of the sea while the free wind spit my fairy dust into the smirking bottle you trusted.
thatdudeeddie
September 3, 2012 at 8:51 am
Thank you. Feel free to drop a link to it here. I’d love to check it out.
Peace and Love.
hiddinsight
September 5, 2012 at 1:30 pm
http://persuaded2go.wordpress.com/2012/08/31/the-wet-kiss-of-wavering-tides/
A post that could have gone with “Something is Hidden” …Cheers.
Ms. Nine
August 31, 2012 at 7:49 pm
So loaded with sound. Loved it.
thatdudeeddie
September 3, 2012 at 8:51 am
Thank you.
buckwheatsrisk
August 31, 2012 at 9:29 pm
you brought it home again!
thatdudeeddie
September 3, 2012 at 8:51 am
Thanks Bucky.
SwirlGirl
September 1, 2012 at 12:30 am
The magic in this one is in the sounds…and the fact that, read aloud, it makes me sound way cooler than…uuumm…who are the “cool” rappers these days?
Kidding aside, this is wonderful. Truly.
thatdudeeddie
September 3, 2012 at 8:54 am
Thank you.
Peace and Love.
Diane
September 1, 2012 at 9:26 am
I had to hold this for a while and consider it, and to be absolutely honest look up a couple of the words maceral for example – thank you so much for making me think. – Diane
thatdudeeddie
September 3, 2012 at 8:56 am
This is my goal, to make the reader think. Thank you Diane, you just made me happy.
Peace and Love.
ren
September 5, 2012 at 11:43 am
That is amazing !
ruleofstupid
September 25, 2012 at 9:07 am
Some great poetry here – a kind of lexicographical drum-kit. Thankyou for your shower of likes. Only second day blogging – it has fired my enthusiasm.
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Can you record some of this – I think it would be great to hear it, catch the fantastic elastic of syntactic gymnastics
thatdudeeddie
September 27, 2012 at 2:29 pm
Awesome! I’m glad you like it! I’m trying to save for a laptop so that I can start recording vlogs