Feather by tedious feather…
The droplets process the wedges over the ledge’s pledges to weather.
Chocolate endeavors withers the leather altogether.
That’s not true, so ensue whatever you glue.
Smell the brew?
Misconstrue what architects do.
Can you understand?
Did you not withstand the angels’ angles firsthand?
Band as one, undone and bland.
Muscles of mourn, my right-hand man.
Mouths of mussels are torn, flight and scorn.
Dust on corn, command commerce on a plantation’s demand.
Now, expand the unplanned plans to withstand fortification of land.
In walls of sand, so grand.
Spareness in poorest pores of fairness..
Little to no awareness in the glands of the hands we cherish.
We’re here to stay.
~ That Dude Eddie~
Please don’t forget to share this. 
Peace and Love.
Brian Anthony Hardie (Portland, Oregon)
August 26, 2012 at 10:24 pm
this one is so musical and rhythmic. fuck yeah
thatdudeeddie
August 27, 2012 at 8:48 am
Thank you.
thispoet
August 26, 2012 at 10:46 pm
love the rhythm and your brilliant last line.
thatdudeeddie
August 27, 2012 at 8:48 am
buckwheatsrisk
August 26, 2012 at 10:48 pm
i’m rapping away! love it!
thatdudeeddie
August 27, 2012 at 8:49 am
Word…..
buckwheatsrisk
August 27, 2012 at 9:49 am
gloriathepoet
August 26, 2012 at 11:24 pm
love the rhymes
deanabo
August 27, 2012 at 6:05 am
Great writing.
Diane
August 27, 2012 at 8:15 am
I often pick one line from your work that is a favourite – I know that’s odd but it doesn’t detract from the whole, simply it’s one line that whaps me between the eyes. Who knows why,and indeed it doesn’t matter, this is poetry after all.
this time it was the Dust on corn one closely followed by ” The droplets process the wedges over the ledge’s pledges to weather.” which is such a wonderful picture. thanks – Diane
thatdudeeddie
August 27, 2012 at 8:51 am
Thanks Diane, like you said its all poetry so whatever speaks to you. I look forward to hearing your favorite line in my next piece.
Peace and Love.
daemos1
August 27, 2012 at 9:52 am
You’re a wizard man, love the wordsmithery!
thatdudeeddie
August 30, 2012 at 10:06 am
Thank you.
Peace and Love.
a solemn punch
August 28, 2012 at 10:58 pm
As expected, another wonderful wordplay from thatdudeeddie. You simply rock!
thatdudeeddie
August 30, 2012 at 10:08 am
Thank you.
Peace and Love.
on thehomefrontandbeyond
August 29, 2012 at 11:53 am
well done maestro!
christinekiefer
August 29, 2012 at 5:25 pm
someone has a knack for rhyming, another thing i say to almost no one ever. Bravo!
thatdudeeddie
August 30, 2012 at 10:07 am
I’m honored, thank you.
Peace and Love.
Anna Scott Graham
August 29, 2012 at 9:42 pm
I really like “Mouths of mussels are torn, flight and scorn.” “Chocolate endeavors withers the leather together” is very good too. This has a very Eno-feel to it, lovely lovely!
Thanks for stopping by my blog today.
thatdudeeddie
August 30, 2012 at 10:07 am
No problem and thank you for your kind words.
Peace and Love.
yepirategunn
August 31, 2012 at 10:52 am
Now THAT was your finest – as Churchill said, your finest hour, from the feathers all the way to epanding th unplanned plans and making the stand. Just wonderful.
yepirategunn
August 31, 2012 at 10:53 am
Reblogged this on Managua Gunn's Pirate Haven and commented:
As Churchill said, his finest hour – wonderful wordsmithing…
managingemergencies
September 8, 2012 at 6:41 pm
I like rhym and I am glad to see it is still in style here on this blog.