It is… too late to hold the gold map now.
The bold rose reaps a different path now.
I’m the one who laughs now.
I’m still the one with that frown.
With or without that crown…
Must be fate to die.
Must be a mistake to try.
mUST BE destiny TO shiNe.
It is… only a matter of time before an escape is found.
Everything they take, even the ache of sound.
Spherical retribution, turn RIGHT around.
Inspirational electrocution.
We sought institution.
Me distraught was the absolution.
See?
You forget the hugs of words in pollution.
~That Dude Eddie~
(Hey guys, I know I haven’t been too active recently, but I’ve been putting the finishing touches on my book. I hope I didn’t lose my touch.)
Please don’t forget to share this. 
Love and Peace.
buckwheatsrisk
August 23, 2012 at 6:20 pm
you so didn’t lose your touch!
thatdudeeddie
August 23, 2012 at 7:21 pm
Awwwl, thank you ^_^
buckwheatsrisk
August 23, 2012 at 7:52 pm
you’re welcome!
unfetteredbs
August 23, 2012 at 8:55 pm
great movement and i love very last line. (good luck with the book)
thatdudeeddie
August 30, 2012 at 10:09 am
Thank you.
Peace and Love.
Mojahed Reaz
August 24, 2012 at 1:50 am
Very Nice! I like the Flow giving that subtle Blow, in your poems and writings, just a suggestion, kindly not to put a period after the verse in the poem, every verse has to be open ended just like the thought, it should be free flowing…………..or flowing freely
Diane
August 24, 2012 at 5:08 am
I think that break did you good, this is gorgeous, I loved the rhythm. – Diane
thatdudeeddie
August 24, 2012 at 8:42 pm
Thanks Diane, always a pleasure to hear from you.
Love and Peace.
Camille Bernadette Carter
August 24, 2012 at 1:18 pm
Good poem; I especially liked the last line!
thatdudeeddie
August 24, 2012 at 8:41 pm
☽✵ℳ00ℕṦℌ1И3✵☾
August 24, 2012 at 10:07 pm
I have nominated you for the Seven Things About Me award. Details here…http://m00nsh1n3.wordpress.com/2012/08/25/seven-things-about-me-award/
feistyredgirl
August 27, 2012 at 10:18 am
great entry!
michelle gd
August 28, 2012 at 10:02 am
“the ache of sound” … love these words.
thatdudeeddie
August 30, 2012 at 10:10 am
mjeanpike
August 29, 2012 at 12:08 pm
loved it
malctg
August 29, 2012 at 8:26 pm
No it’s great. Thank you for liking mine. The Foureyed Poet
thatdudeeddie
August 30, 2012 at 10:10 am
No problem, thank you.
Peace and Love.
elizabeth
August 31, 2012 at 9:33 am
You didn’t
sventb123
August 31, 2012 at 10:52 am
You’re really awesome! I hope to become as good as you are one day, but then I’ll have to train really hard hahaha (: respect is what you deserve!
thatdudeeddie
August 31, 2012 at 4:53 pm
Appreciate it man. It’s not a matter of who’s better as long as you write from the heart.
sventb123
September 16, 2012 at 5:46 am
I will always write from the heart, poetry from the heart is real poetry! thanks, you’re amazing!
harulawordsthatserve
September 2, 2012 at 12:56 pm
I like the music and rhythm of this poem, almost like a rap, I can imagine it in a poetry slam. Thanks for dropping by and leaving a like..:-)
danroberson
September 8, 2012 at 10:29 am
Excellent poetry. Heartfelt with a nice rhythm and flow.
Tanveer Rauf
September 11, 2012 at 9:07 am
WORTH READING:) PLEASE KEEP VISITING MY BLOGS
karachilovaa14
September 15, 2012 at 1:34 pm
Gaaaahhhh. I love this so much I’m going to read it to my friends and in assembly at school (everyday we have to recite quotations). You liked one of my poems, and I’m sooo glad you did, because now I’ve found this! and you! and ohmygod, so good. <3
thatdudeeddie
September 15, 2012 at 3:18 pm
Thank yoooouuu, I’m so honored
D
DiAnne Ebejer
September 20, 2012 at 9:39 pm
Interesting style! I really like it! Hope there will be more soon!