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Missing Mine

It is… too late to hold the gold map now.

The bold rose reaps a different path now.

I’m the one who laughs now.

I’m still the one with that frown.

With or without that crown…

Must be fate to die.

Must be a mistake to try.

mUST BE destiny TO shiNe.

It is… only a matter of time before an escape is found.

Everything they take, even the ache of sound.

Spherical retribution, turn RIGHT around.

Inspirational electrocution.

We sought institution.

Me distraught was the absolution.

See?

You forget the hugs of words in pollution.

~That Dude Eddie~

(Hey guys, I know I haven’t been too active recently, but I’ve been putting the finishing touches on my book. I hope I didn’t lose my touch.)

 

Please don’t forget to share this. :)

Love and Peace.

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27 comments on “Missing Mine

  1. you so didn’t lose your touch!

  2. great movement and i love very last line. (good luck with the book)

  3. Very Nice! I like the Flow giving that subtle Blow, in your poems and writings, just a suggestion, kindly not to put a period after the verse in the poem, every verse has to be open ended just like the thought, it should be free flowing…………..or flowing freely

  4. I think that break did you good, this is gorgeous, I loved the rhythm. – Diane

  5. Good poem; I especially liked the last line! :-)

  6. “the ache of sound” … love these words.

  7. No it’s great. Thank you for liking mine. The Foureyed Poet

  8. You didn’t :)

  9. You’re really awesome! I hope to become as good as you are one day, but then I’ll have to train really hard hahaha (: respect is what you deserve!

  10. I like the music and rhythm of this poem, almost like a rap, I can imagine it in a poetry slam. Thanks for dropping by and leaving a like..:-)

  11. Excellent poetry. Heartfelt with a nice rhythm and flow.

  12. WORTH READING:) PLEASE KEEP VISITING MY BLOGS

  13. Gaaaahhhh. I love this so much I’m going to read it to my friends and in assembly at school (everyday we have to recite quotations). You liked one of my poems, and I’m sooo glad you did, because now I’ve found this! and you! and ohmygod, so good. <3

  14. Interesting style! I really like it! Hope there will be more soon!

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